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    <title>Tuesday Flash Focus: Recent First Lines to Inspire Your Own</title>
    <summary>A listing of some recent first lines to inspire one&apos;s own.</summary>
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      <name>Randall Brown</name>
      
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      <![CDATA[Michelle Reale's "<a href="http://www.smokelong.com/flash/michellereale28.asp">What Passes for Normal</a>" at <a href="http://smokelong.com/"><em>SmokeLong Quarterly</em></a><br /><br /><a href="http://smokelong.com/"></a>
<blockquote>My mother hones in on the neighbors and doesn't waste any time offering to babysit their daughter.</blockquote>
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Douglas Campbell's "<a href="http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-destiny-of-archer-deft-by-douglas-campbell/">The Destiny of Archer Deft</a>" in <em><a href="http://www.everydayfiction.com/">Everyday Fiction</a><br /><br /></em>
<blockquote>Deep in the Forest of Awe, Archer Deft walked alone, seeking the Exalted Destiny his mother had predicted for him.</blockquote>


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Lydia Copeland's "<a href="http://www.elimae.com/2010/02/Exo.html">Exoskeleton</a>" from <em><a href="http://www.elimae.com/index.html">elimae</a><br /><br /></em>
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It is difficult to tell when I am sleeping and when my mother's arms move above her head to tie something or when the wind blows against the living room side of the house. <br /></p></blockquote><p>

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Sean Lovelace's "<a href="http://www.juked.com/2009/09/tobehappy.asp">To Be Happy</a>" from <em><a href="http://www.juked.com/index.html">juked</a></em>
</p><blockquote>Throw things.  For example apples.  I must have thrown at least 400 apples into the side of my house last spring.  </blockquote>
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<p>Eric Burke's "<a href="http://www.pankmagazine.com/?p=1432">Son, Litterateur</a>" from <em><a href="http://www.pankmagazine.com/">Pank</a></em>
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My mother built a concrete block wall to hold up half our yard. <br /></p></blockquote>
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Kuzhali Manickavel's "<a href="http://www.friggmagazine.com/issuetwentyseven/fiction/manickavel/notes-made.htm">Notes Made in Connnection with the Disappearance of a Boy Outside the Tropicool Icy-Land Urban Indian Slum as Investigated by the Law &amp; Order: Special Victims Unit</a>" from <em><a href="http://www.friggmagazine.com/">FRiGG</a></em>

</p><blockquote><strong>Key Items Found at the Scene of Abduction</strong>
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Penny frogs--115<br />
Fanny pack--1<br />
Condoms--0<br />
Snail shells--8 empty, 3 cracked with snail still inside, 2 snails dead, 1 in surgery<br /> </blockquote>
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Kirsten Rue's "<a href="http://quickfiction.org/read/614/spelling/">Spelling</a>" at <em><a href="http://quickfiction.org/">Quick Fiction</a></em><p><br />
</p><blockquote><p>The words never come simply to her, never just arrive the way milk bottles shiver down the shoots in old factory footage, each lid smacked on with a popping sound.</p></blockquote>

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    <title>Comment from Elaine on 2010-02-16</title>
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        <name>Elaine</name>
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        <![CDATA[<p>Great site, RB. Didn't know of it, and so glad I do now. </p>]]>
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    <published>2010-02-17T02:59:22Z</published>
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    <title>Comment from david erlewine on 2010-02-17</title>
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        <name>david erlewine</name>
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        <![CDATA[<p>outstanding choices, all.  michelle's story is one of the nastiest, and best, i've read in a long time.</p>]]>
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    <published>2010-02-17T12:46:49Z</published>
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    <title>Comment from Randall Brown on 2010-02-17</title>
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        <![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Elaine. Glad you found it!</p>]]>
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    <published>2010-02-17T17:17:06Z</published>
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    <title>Comment from Randall Brown on 2010-02-17</title>
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        <![CDATA[<p>True dat, David.</p>]]>
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    <published>2010-02-17T17:18:01Z</published>
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    <title>Comment from Lydia  on 2010-02-18</title>
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        <![CDATA[<p>Thanks for mentioning my story in such fine company!</p>]]>
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    <published>2010-02-18T16:03:51Z</published>
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    <title>Comment from Randall Brown on 2010-02-18</title>
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        <![CDATA[<p>You're quite welcome.</p>]]>
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    <published>2010-02-18T23:32:43Z</published>
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